At my very first #date…take -1

The moon was more bright this evening, looking like smiling towards me to encourage me and wish me luck for my very first dinner date with her,
I had always dreamed about it since i was in love and mad about her , every moment i dreamt her. But that moment of life arrived today.
Eagerness in the eyes, never like ending waiting, all eyes towards entrance , gazing to see just her, uncontrolled patience. I was having real restless moments. Every second was like feeling like never ending decades.
Thinking all in mind what to say and what not to say to her, how to start talking with and how to manage her all killer looks and heart hunting beauty.

Well it wasn’t easy at all to talk someone whom do you love, my romeo friends will agree me, who have witnessed this scenario at least once in life. The courage that needs to take a constant eye contact, to talk with attitude what you want to and remain cool dude when you are burning inside.
Lots of things coming and going fastly in my mind, what should be my approach and words, which romantic hero should i copy, Tom cruise or brad Pitt. I was dressed too like as a hero, like never before. What should i order to look cool and dashing stud ( no alcohol please haha).
Carrying this a bunch of old fashioned style of roses and a chocolate box every one passing by me was laughing and wishing me luck , cause they seemed that it is my first date, as that was no rocket science in it , when you are looking at my moves and restless walk at the reception here and there, checking time after every minute, just like showing my brand new Swiss watch. And yeah constantly looking at the door as she arrived or not.
I was living a hell like long waiting, still there wasn’t a sign of her, my mind was in a confused state of mess thinking ” is she coming or dropped her idea?” But hang on she never broken her words before so I convinced myself , that she had told she will come , so she will come.
Moments after moments were running on,  and

Bazingaaaa….

There she comes, looking her entrance at the door i was feeling my all wishes came true. Suddenly got pumped up from a frozen waiting frog to a dancing ,charming and happening monkey ( yeah a goofy , smiling , dancing monkey haha.).
After controlling my mind not to doing any funny business, i take my walk towards her , to welcome her and make a grand walk with my princess through the hall. To show that finally this king is  with his queen. I reached at her, with a smiling face , saying ” hey, finally arrived, i thought you never gonna come.”
She stared me with a cunning eyes replying,” yes , i had to come, i told you so.” And adding to that ” you don’t look  much happy to see me , do you ?”  , That was a bouncer for me , a real hard question to crack. I was shattered at her very first line , imagining how can a cute little mouse survive in front of a smart , cunning, beautiful kinky cat.

It was still hard to face her , I gathered all my strength and said, ” well, why not one should be happy after seeing his magical dream coming true , on a wonderful , sweet romantic dinner with a gorgeous , beautiful ,smart angel  ? ”
Well that was a bang on first flirting dialogue from me. Waiting to see what should be her response.

She smiled at me, taking my hand in hers, came close and said,
“yeah ?? Well then come on lets carry on, my ROMEO , by the way nice flirting try on first take, looks like you have made nice practice of dialogues haha.!! ”
I was on the top of the world hearing that , got a real stunning reply to start off the date. After all this nervous start , finally a comprehensive stroke of words by me , and better than the best replies as always by her.
Looks like i am having a promising performance at the start of my very first date.

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Well lots of to carry on and even lots of to surprise on.
We will see what happened next in upcoming parts.
Don’t forget to claim your thoughts on it. Critics are also most welcome. I hope you liked it.
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About Shadab.Rogers.

Shadab its my first name and the Rogers is from captain America's name steve Rogers, i am big big fan of it.. Apart from it i am big fan of tennis especially Rafa Nadal . I love to listen music mostly i like fusion one But hey ..... Dont ask me to sing anything I am really really bad singer .. Haha On the personal counterpart i am very much single ..... Take it as a invitation ladies..... Haha ha ha just kidding folks..

Posted on November 12, 2015, in Uncategorized and tagged . Bookmark the permalink. 49 Comments.

  1. Quite candid! She seems like a catch. Hold on to her. 🙂

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  2. This is very beautiful! please keep writing we need more talented people in the writer’s world.

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    • Haha.
      Well thanks your appreciation.
      I always try my best. Don’t know its talent or not , but try to write what i feel.
      Its my privilege and honor that i could able to meet readers like you.
      Your words means lot and encourages me.
      I always tell everyone , not to hesitate to make any comments or harsh feedbacks if there are any.
      That will be helpful for me to improve myself.
      Thank you for your kind words. Keep supporting.

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  3. Aww I loved this…adorable. It was nice to read a male perspective for once and know they’re just as nervous! Can’t wait to read more 🙂

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  4. A fun, and warm read! 🙂

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  5. As long as the interntions is pure no need to get nervous😄just sayin’

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  6. A nice and crisp content. I have experienced the same with my knife-edged-eye girl. Just became cool and you have taken me to my early days………

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  7. Hi, you painted a lovely picture and it brought back memories of my younger, carefree romantic years! So good to hear it from a guy’s perspective, really enjoyed it.

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  8. Wonderful is the only word I get, when I did read this, great going mate. You write experiences of yours and I write stories which are related to love. You have inspired me to write a new one. Cheers.

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    • Thats glad to hear ,dear.
      Hope your support and appreciation to this mate remains always ,
      Waiting for your feedbacks, remarks and suggestions if any.
      Thank you dear for stopping by and for your warm kind words.

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  9. How do you score the woman of your dreams by going on one date? I have been on countless Dates (more on my blog, The 50 Dates Challenge -> http://www.50dateschallenge.com)…..and there is still no sign of prince charming! ;D
    But jokes aside, I am really happy for you and can’t wait to read how your love story turns out.
    XX

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    • Haha.
      I never mentioned here that I scored her,
      Its said the affection is by my side,
      And you will know how i managed to get one date by her, after all kinds of attempts in upcoming parts.

      But thank you for your kind words of appreciation and stopping by and giving your thoughtful remarks on it.
      Your views are most welcome and awaited .
      Keep supporting.

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  10. Good catch….. I was shattered at her very first line imagining how can a cute little mouse can survive in front of a smart beautiful kinky cat….. lines are impressive I am holding myself hard so that I don’t steal your lines……impressive cute story

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  11. Just read your Blog . I am an Indian Author of Book on short stories : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara . I would suggest you present a copy of my Book to her on your next date . Don’t forget to tell me the day when is your next date . Happy Blogging !

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  12. lovely story….I love the emotion you could feel from your story….great job…kat

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  13. Woww…. Soo beautifully expressed. I must say the simplicity in your writing just caught me till the end. I really loved the way, u expressed each emotion and moment. I wish I could also express my thoughts so nicely…. Would love to read more and learn the art of writing from you.
    Keep posting….. 🙂

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    • Haha.
      Well thats glad to hear,
      Yes i love to be simple, thats the way i can reach and convey what i want to say.
      Your appreciation means lot to me. Encourages a lot to write even more good as i can.
      Thank you dear once again.

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  15. Like you friendly pleasant way of writing 🙂 bright blessings

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  16. Well?? Did u go on another date?

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  17. Nice story, Shadab! If you enjoy writing just keep at it!

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  18. Great writing. Thanks for the response on shareofheartblog.wordpress.com

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  19. I could feel your tension…LOLOL so cute:)

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